Rough Edit

What Went Well:

the beginning was changed for the better (initially it was supposed to be initial shots of Cambridge in a sequence, see: storyboard here); the video starts slowly and not overtly dramatic, like the song
most cuts between studio and outside location go very well together (see: 2:50) because it goes well with the tempo of the song at the time
we changed the colour of studio footage to fit them well together (mid shot had a colder tone than the close up, see: beginning of the video)

include more narrative in the video by filming some additional footage
alter timings of some clips to fit the lip syncing
some videos have unecessary endings/beginnings to them; relace them with other clips (see: 1:50)
lower the sound of some parts of the song (see: 2:30)
add transitions to make the video more exciting
make sure all videos are in the right sequence